Ketchup or Catsup: preference in Black and White (5)

Again, I just sent Freeman a bunch of black and white samples of my work for a print dummy. I’m illustrating his haiku and we’re seeing what some different styles look like in print.  I’m posting a few  I sent to make up for a week without posts.   None of the ones I’ve chosen so far are striking me as very haikuey right now.